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2006-01-30 [Sunny Silverunicorn]: yeah, that's true. the scarred girl is in her early twenties, and the young lad is older than others by a year or so of difference. The old man is like a virtual help for them, for when they are in big troubles, or they have problems with teh ship... and they can have heard about the treasure from him... like he has searched for it all his life.
2006-01-30 [The Blonde Witch]: Oh I see, so he's not really there, more like a memory base left in the ship?
2006-01-30 [The Blonde Witch]: what other intrigues can we make? By the way, I'm gonna get started on a drawing for the ship plan tonight, just an idea.
2006-01-30 [Sunny Silverunicorn]: yeah that's right the way I have thought he'd b there. Yeah I'm gonno draw a sketch too... we shoudl think of putting more clashes between the characters I have and you do, as to make the writing we do in return for the others postings is more than we write with out own characters talking to eachother.
2006-01-30 [The Blonde Witch]: Yeah, definately. I'm gonna make one of the twins really dislike your captain boy ;) He's gonna be a real agressive one, but he has a lot of respect for the navigator, so she keeps him in his tracks.
2006-01-30 [Sunny Silverunicorn]: righto... I'm gonno go sleep now, I hope to habe a good sketch of all my chars tomorrow ;P
2006-01-30 [The Blonde Witch]: he he, good luck with that ! kudos!
2006-01-31 [Sunny Silverunicorn]: Can't the pregnant girl really love my young lad? cause if she can't, I guess he's gonno die in the end. I dreamt about it last night, as I had been thinking about it when I went to sleep, and I saw that he was very sad, nearly depressed, and it was like close to the end of the story and he fell off the rails of the ship into the endless dark space! *dries tears*
2006-01-31 [The Blonde Witch]: wow. *pats Sunny* well, if you put it like that ;) I suppose we could to this: captain flirts, she rejects him, baby born - she chooses one twin, twin die, and she ends up asking forgiveness of captain?
2006-01-31 [Sunny Silverunicorn]: awww, but.. but... then I'll feel guilty for the death of the twin! But it's more melodramatic this way :P
2006-01-31 [The Blonde Witch]: it is, and we need some drama ;) he he, what the heck - they're twins -we've still got one..but we need more interaction between them..suspens of some kind.
2006-01-31 [Sunny Silverunicorn]: hmm, could we perhaps have a spy between them, who gives off their location to the wicked captain? they think they have a spy among them, but the truth is they have been bugged with locating devices... how's that?
2006-01-31 [The Blonde Witch]: good one..and because one of the twins is real agressive they can think that it's him ;)
2006-01-31 [Sunny Silverunicorn]: nice :P so... who's the unborned one's father? could we make a conflict out of that?
2006-01-31 [The Blonde Witch]: I bet we could, yes ^^ Hmm, I don't hink any of the guys are actually the baby's father - that could probably be some dickhead serving under the evil pirate queen - but they could all have reasons to think that they are the one ;) Oh and what about a very sisterly relationship between the girls? Sorta - navigator is big sister, instead of some jelousy thing going on.
2006-01-31 [Sunny Silverunicorn]: yeah, that's a great idea.
2006-01-31 [The Blonde Witch]: righto :) and of course, we must have these small battles, and them attacking trade ships once in a while.
2006-01-31 [The Blonde Witch]: but we need more..perhaps something with the scarred navigator girl? we could make it so that no one knows who her half-mother is,
2006-01-31 [Sunny Silverunicorn]: O.o that would be a great twist, and since no one knows about her half-mother, no one knows where the scars come from... which she says she has gotten them through an accident. :D btw My sister, whom I was talking about thie story, said that the virtual memory of the uncle, the old man, could wait to come until they are stuck in a big troubled situation. It appearing in the ship to help them would be nice, non?
2006-01-31 [Sunny Silverunicorn]: And.... here's the promised drawing of my chars :D I looooove how they all turned out!!! And the captain is my favorite!!! don't you just love him!! LOL And I added some futuresque elements too :P
2006-01-31 [The Blonde Witch]: I love them! They're great! Especially the captain ;) I'll finish off my drawing today too, at least of the two twins..and I've started the design for the possible ship. and yeah, the virtual memory should only appear when they're really in trouble.
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